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Water cycle ,which is continuous movment of water.

Water cycle, which is continuous movment of water. BMr2m
This given diagram shows the process of the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface on the Earth. Overall, the process consists of some stages starting with snow surface running off till precipitating. At the first stage, snow runs off from ground water to imprevious layer. Then, while running to the ocean, it instructs saltwater. After this, the evaporation process begins. In this process, ocean contributes about four fifths of total water vapour in air. After this process water vapour condenses and formates cloud. Finally, cloud precipite to lakes. And this process continious like this.
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on, above and below the surface on the Earth.
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layer. Then, while running to the ocean, it instructs saltwater. After this, the evaporation
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. In this
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, ocean contributes about four fifths of total
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vapour
in air. After this
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vapour
condenses and
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cloud.
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IELTS academic Water cycle, which is continuous movment of water.

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