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The graphs below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod Universit.

The graphs below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod Universit. P0bB
The given pie charts illustrate various reasons to choose Dorrifod University between two groups. First group includes the atudents who are between 18 to 24 years old and the second group includes 25 or more older students. Actually both chart contain 6 reasons. We can see from the charts both groups main cause to show interest for distance. 1st group show the least reason for the reputation of the teaching staff and 2nd group for the facilities on campus. Initially, both group choose university consequently 36%and 39% for short distance. Moreover, younger group consider reputation of teaching staff 2% but other group give 12%. On the other hand, 1st group show 14 % interest on campus facilities though second group show only 2%. Course offer got 2nd most priority for both group by 35% and 24%. On the contrary a big difference is in related to industry. Furthermore, only 6% differences in opportunity to study abroad as part of course.
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pie charts illustrate various reasons to choose
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Dorrifod
University between two
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.
First
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includes the
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atudents
who are
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between 18 to 24
years
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and the second
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includes 25 or
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more older
students. Actually both chart contain 6 reasons.

We can
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see
from the charts both
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main cause to
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interest for distance. 1st
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group
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show
the least reason for the reputation of the teaching staff and 2nd
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for the facilities on campus.

Initially
, both
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choose university
consequently
36%and 39% for short distance.
Moreover
, younger
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group
consider reputation of teaching staff 2%
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but
other
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give 12%.
On the other hand
, 1st
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show
14 % interest on campus facilities though second
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group
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only
2%.

Course offer
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got
2nd most priority for both
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group
by 35% and 24%.
On the contrary
a
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difference is in related to industry.
Furthermore
,
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only
6% differences in opportunity to study abroad as part
of course
.

IELTS academic The graphs below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod Universit.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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