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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. ojnX

The diagrams illustrate stages and equipments to make cement and how cement is utilized in the production of concrete for construction. Looking an overall, the production of cement involves a five stages, that begins with the mixing of raw materials, and ends in the packaging of new cement bags. Moreover, cement and a few other simple ingredients are used to produce concrete through a single- stage procedure. In the first stage of manufacturing of cement, limestone and clay are crushed using a crusher to make a fine powder, which is then mixed in a mixer before being passed through a rotating heater. After that, the heated mixture transferred to a grinder using a conveyor belt. Subsequently, cement has been produced, and the process finishes with packaged and transported to building sites, where it can be used to make concrete. Regarding the second diagram, concrete is made up of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and half gravel fed into a rotating concrete mixture to mix, and ready for construction.

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