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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. 8N9x
The table depicts the proportion of four different fuel types (Coal, Nuclear, Petroleum, Hydro & wind, and Other sources) in percentages for Malaysia, Japan, Singapore, Thailand, and South Korea. Overall, petroleum products are the least used fuels and other sources of fuels contribute consistently in all the nations. Thailand does not use nuclear power at all. Coal and lignite generate 61% and 42% of the electricity generated in Malaysia and Singapore respectively and contributes the least in Thailand with 3%. Nuclear power provides almost half of the energy generated in Japan, followed by a contribution of one-third in South Korea. Alternate sources of energy constitute 42% of electricity generated in Thailand. Hydro and wind power makes up 48% of the total energy produced in South Korea while it contributes the least in Japan and Singapore with 3%. Thailand uses petroleum products to generate 36% of its power while petroleum is used negligibly in Malaysia, where only 2% is extracted from petrol.
The table depicts the proportion of four
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fuel types (Coal, Nuclear,
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Petroleum
, Hydro & wind, and Other sources) in percentages for Malaysia, Japan, Singapore, Thailand, and South Korea.

Overall
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petroleum
products are the least
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used
fuels and other sources of fuels contribute
consistently
in all the nations. Thailand does not
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use
nuclear
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power
at all.

Coal and lignite generate 61% and 42% of the electricity generated in Malaysia and Singapore
respectively
and contributes the least in Thailand with 3%. Nuclear
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power
provides almost half of the energy generated in Japan, followed by a contribution of one-third in South Korea. Alternate sources of energy constitute 42% of electricity generated in Thailand.

Hydro and wind
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power
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makes
up 48% of the total energy produced in South Korea while it contributes the least in Japan and Singapore with 3%. Thailand
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uses
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petroleum
products to generate 36% of its
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power
while
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petroleum
is
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used
negligibly
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from petrol.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

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