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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 2BAo
This line graph explains the enrolments of overseas and local students in Australian universties. In 2001, totally overseas student were less compare to local students. Students from overseas who were commencing in 2001 were also comparatively less from local students. Overseas students percentage has been increasing constantly through the years but the number of local student has been fluctuating over the years. From 2003 to 2010, students from other countries tend to study in Australia has developed rapdily, in other words, roughly 30000 to 80000 students from abroad attended schooling in Australian universities. Similarly, from 2001 to 2005 the counting of local students has increased gradually but in the year of 2006, percentage of local students in Australian universities is constant, alternatively it is maintained from 2006 to 2010. Each graph refers the number of students which includes international students and local students attempted to study in Australian universities over ten years.
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has been fluctuating over the years. From 2003 to 2010,
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from other countries tend to study in Australia has developed
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from abroad attended schooling in Australian universities.
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in Australian universities is constant,
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Each graph refers the number of
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which includes international
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attempted to study in Australian universities over ten years.

IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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