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The graphs below show the percentages of people using public transportation and private cars in different cities in Australia between 2000 and 2010.

The graphs below show the percentages of people using public transportation and private cars in different cities in Australia between 2000 and 2010. bYQn3
The assigned line graphs illustrate the information about the people who used the public transportation as well as private car in five city of Australia between year 2000 and 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Commencing at 20% which was the highest percentage of individuals who used public transportation in Sydney in 2010, while this ratio declined slightly to almost 80% in 2010. Notably, the percentile of travellers from Perth and Melbourne increased from 50% to 70% and 5% to 7% respectively. Interestingly, the proportion of passenger of public transport it remained stable at in Adelaide and Canberra throughout the given span. Probing further, 80% of people used the private car in 2000 and after a decade it inclined by 10%. Similarly, the percentile of private car user in Perth and Adelaide had increased by 20% throughout the given period. Interestingly, Canberra and Melbourne also showed inclining trend. Overall, it has cleared from above graph that mostly people liked to travel by their private vehicles rather than public transport in given period.
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car in five city of Australia between year 2000 and 2010. The data has
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transportation in Sydney in 2010, while this ratio declined
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from Perth and Melbourne increased from 50% to 70% and 5% to 7%
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Interestingly
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transport it remained stable at in Adelaide and Canberra throughout the
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span.

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car in 2000 and after a decade it inclined by 10%.
Similarly
, the percentile of
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private
car user in Perth and Adelaide had increased by 20% throughout the
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given
period.
Interestingly
, Canberra and Melbourne
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showed
inclining trend.

Overall
, it has cleared from above graph that
mostly
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people
liked to travel by their
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private
vehicles
rather
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