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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 9La2p
This figure contains the architecture of a wave-energy machine and its position. The figure shows the briefing of how a wave energy machine works and placement of the machine from where it can generate energy from wave. The machine consists of two chambers top and bottom, top chamber has turbine and electricity generator and bottom chamber measures the direction of the wave and water level. When wave collide the bottom chamber of the machine it increases the water level air the air flow rotates the turbine and the electricity generator generates the electricity. But it depends on the location of the machine, if machine is installed at small waves then low electricity is generated, But its installation costs is less. And if machine is installed at large waves then large amount of electricity is generated also its installation costs is higher than installation at small waves. In addition installation at large waves get more electricity that can be profitable for long term.
This figure contains the architecture of a wave-energy
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machine
and its position. The figure
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shows
the briefing of how a
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wave
energy
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machine
works and placement of the
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machine
from where it can generate energy from wave.

The
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machine
consists of two
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chambers
top and bottom, top
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chamber
has turbine and
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electricity
generator and bottom
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chamber
measures the direction of the
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wave
and water level. When
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wave
collide the bottom
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chamber
of the
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machine
it increases the water level air the air flow rotates the turbine and the
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electricity
generator generates the electricity.

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machine
, if
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machine
is installed
at
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small
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waves
then low
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electricity
is generated
,
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its installation costs is less. And if
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machine
is installed
at large
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waves
then large amount of
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electricity
is generated
also
its installation costs is higher than installation at
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small
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waves
. In
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installation at large
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waves
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get
more
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electricity
that can be profitable for long term.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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162 words
6.5
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