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The graph below gives information about the wheat production of different countries and their cultivable land areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the wheat production of different countries and their cultivable land areas. ljd9w
The percentage of wheat produced and the available cultivable land areas of five various countries across the globe is illustrated by the bar graphs. Overall, Australia is the most prominent country in terms of land as it has highest percentage of cultivable land mass whereas Russia has the least amount of cultivable land and is inconsequential in terms of both wheat production and agricultural land availabilty. Also, China produces maximum amount of wheat and is in lead as compared to others. India is the second most consequential country which is then followed by USA, China and Russia respectively in terms of available agricultural land. The cultivable land mass is 17% more in India as that of China(15%), but the percentage of wheat produced is approximately 6% more in China than in India(13%). Although 50% of land in Australia is cultivable, a mere 5% of wheat is produced only. Also, the countries USA and Russia produces even less than 10% of wheat out of 25% and 12% of cultivable areas accessible respectively.
The percentage of
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produced and the available cultivable
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land
areas of five various
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countries
across the globe
is illustrated
by the bar graphs.

Overall
, Australia is the most prominent
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country
in terms of
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land
as it has
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highest
percentage of cultivable
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land
mass whereas Russia has the least amount of cultivable
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land
and is inconsequential in terms of both
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wheat
production and agricultural
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land
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availabilty
.
Also
, China produces maximum amount of
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wheat
and is in lead as compared to others.

India is the second most consequential
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country
which is then followed
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by USA
, China and Russia
respectively
in terms of available agricultural
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land
. The cultivable
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land
mass is 17% more in India as that of China(15%),
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the percentage of
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wheat
produced is approximately 6% more in China than in India(13%). Although 50% of
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land
in Australia is cultivable, a mere 5% of
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wheat
is produced
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, the
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countries
USA and Russia produces even less than 10% of
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wheat
out of 25% and 12% of cultivable areas accessible
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about the wheat production of different countries and their cultivable land areas.

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