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The graphs below show the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graphs below show the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. NA2g
The line graph shows visits to an island in the Caribbean, by holidaymakers, from 2010 to 2017. Overall the total visitors increased and this trend was mirrored by both the number of visitors staying on the island and on cruise liners. Total visits started at 1 million in 2010, and then increased throughout the period, except for a brief plateau at about 2. 7 million throughout 2015. A sharp increase in the final year saw visitors rise to 3. 5 million. Tourists staying on the island were about 750 thousand in 2010; then, during the next three years, this doubled. The number plateaued from 2013 to 2015 at 1. 5 million, and then fluctuated at this level over the final two years. Vacationers on cruise liners started the period at 250 thousand, after fluctuating for two years the number rose continually to reach approximately 1. 3 million by 2015. Then, in 2015, the number surpassed those staying on the island and finished at 2 million by 2017.
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visits to an
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in the Caribbean, by holidaymakers, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
the total visitors increased and this trend
was mirrored
by both the
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number
of visitors staying on the
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island
and on cruise liners.

Total visits
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started
at 1
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million
in 2010, and then increased throughout the period,
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except for
a brief plateau at about 2. 7
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million
throughout 2015. A sharp increase in the final year
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saw
visitors rise to 3. 5 million.

Tourists staying on the
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island
were about 750 thousand in 2010; then, during the
next
three years, this doubled. The
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number
plateaued from 2013 to 2015 at 1. 5
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million
, and then fluctuated at this level over the final two years.

Vacationers on cruise liners
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started
the period at 250 thousand, after fluctuating for two years the
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number
rose
continually
to reach approximately 1. 3
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million
by 2015. Then, in 2015, the
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number
surpassed those staying on the
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island
and finished at 2
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million
by 2017.
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