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The charts below show the importance of green space to people in England in 2009 and the volume of visitors to the natural environment in 2009.

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The represented pie charts delineates the information of england about the importance of green space to people in 2009 and volumes of visits to the natural environment. The data has been calibrated in percentage. A cursory glance at the chart denotes that, almost two- third proportion of people gave more importance to green space in 2009 while two fifth percent gave fairly important. The people of England showed the very limited ration of not very important and not at all important to green space. Which was recorded under 5%. It is sequent enough to see that, the total 2. 49 billion visits were in different area but countryside area was on the top where 53 % people visited and green space in town or city showed the second highest rate of visitors with 37%.
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in 2009 and volumes of visits to the natural environment. The data has
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in 2009 while two fifth percent gave
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in town or city
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the second highest rate of visitors with 37%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the importance of green space to people in England in 2009 and the volume of visitors to the natural environment in 2009.

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