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The graph below shows the amount of electricity produced from different energy sources to supply the city of New York between 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the amount of electricity produced from different energy sources to supply the city of New York between 1980 and 2000. D1ep

The given line graph shows the production levels of three main types of fuel (petroleum, coal, and natural gas) in a particular European country, from 1981 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that petroleum was by far the most produced type of fuel, while the amount of natural gas being produced was increasing rapidly. In 1981, the amount of petroleum being produced was around 100 tonnes. It increased steadily over the next few years to reach around 130 tonnes before dropping back to just under 100 tonnes in 1989. It then rose up again to around 130 tonnes in 1995, where it fluctuated slightly until the end of the period. Coal was the second most produced fuel in 1981, at 80 tonnes. Coal production remained constant until it dropped suddenly down to around 50 tonnes in 1985. It rose back up to just over 70 tonnes in 1987 before slowly declining over the next 13 years to just under 40 tonnes. The production of natural gas remained unchanged at about 40 tonnes until around 1991 when it began to rise exponentially

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shows
 the production levels of three main types of fuel (petroleum, coal, and natural gas) in a particular European country, from 1981 to 2000.

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seen
 that petroleum was by far the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomposedformed
produced
 type of fuel, while

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produced
 was increasing rapidly
.

In 1981, the amount of petroleum being You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomposedformed
produced
 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 100 tonnes. It increased

steadily
 over the next
 few years to reach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
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before
 dropping back to

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just
 under 100 tonnes in 1989. It then rose up again to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 130 tonnes in 1995,

where it fluctuated slightly
 until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

Coal was the second most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomposedformed
produced
 fuel in 1981, at 80 tonnes. Coal production

remained constant until it dropped suddenly
 down to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 50 tonnes in 1985. It rose

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just
 over 70 tonnes in 1987 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
slowly
 declining over the next
 13 years

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just
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around
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