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The Chart below shows the aids from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008-2010

The Chart below shows the aids from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008-2010 mMo1
The given column graph encapsulate the number of aids given by six different developed countries (US, Germany, UK, Japan, Netherland, Sweden) between 2008 and 2010. In 2008, US gives the highest number of aids, which is 220, 000, 000. The UK and Japan has given 12 billion aids, which is less than half of US. All Other fours different countries gave around 10 billion aids. In 2009, the Japan had gave 10 billions aids and double of it I. e. 20 billions aids were given by US, which is highest among other different countries. The lowest number of aids (8 billions) is given by Sweden. Number of aids were substantially increase by 4 and 2 billions in Germany and Netherland respectively. In 2010, the number of aids given is remarkable increases in US by 5 billions. The second highest number of aids is given by Germany. The number of aids is given by Germany. The number of aids given by Fours different developed countries is between 7 and 13 billions. Overall, the US has given big number of aids between 2008 and 2010 among all six developed countries.
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