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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. 0r7G

The picture details the manufacturing process for instant noodles. Overall, this entirely man-made operation can be divided into 4 main stages beginning with storage of raw ingredients, assembling the dry noodles, cooking and finally packaging for later consumption. Instant noodles start in storage silos where the flour is kept. The flour is transported, along with water and oil from another source, to the mixers and rolled into sheets of dough beginning the assembly line steps. These sheets are cut into strips with factory machinery and then formed into compact ‘Noodles discs’ to be fried in oil, left to dry and ultimately placed in cups along with assorted vegetables and spices. The final preparation step is to label and seal the contents so that the end product is ready for retail.

The picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 the manufacturing process for instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. Overall
, this entirely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made operation can be divided
 into 4 main stages beginning with storage of raw ingredients, assembling the dry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
, cooking and finally
 packaging for later consumption.

Instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 in storage silos where the flour is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
. The flour is transported
, along with water and oil from another source, to the mixers and rolled into sheets of dough beginning the assembly line steps. These sheets are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into strips with factory machinery and then formed into compact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
‘Noodles
 discs’ to be fried
 in oil, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to dry and ultimately
 placed in cups along with assorted vegetables and spices.

The final preparation step is to label and seal the contents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product is ready for retail. 

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

130 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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