Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. r881k
The given line graph depicts the university enrolments of foreign and local students from 2001 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that both lines have grown significantly over the presented 10 year period. In addition, the quantity of foreign students was always far lower than that of the locals. In compliance with the graph, the number of students enrolled was mere 20000 people in 2001. However, by 2010, the indicator has rocketed to the whopping 80000 students. It is also worth mentioning, that the graph has not got any highly visible oscillations over the whole period of time. According to the lower line, it is obvious that the growth in the number of foreign students enrolled in the Australian university was not so drastical as of local people. The initial quantity of overseas people being enrolled in the university constitutes in the neighbourhood of 12000 students, and then after a steady increase from 2001 to 2008 its indicator became equal to 30000 foreigners. Thereafter, within one year from 2008 to 2009 it jumped sharply and after a further tiny rise from 2009 to 2010, it accomplished its peak of nearly 42000 students.
The
given
line graph depicts the university
enrolments
of foreign and local
students
from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that both lines have grown
significantly
over the presented
10 year
period.
In addition
, the quantity of foreign
students
was always far lower than that of the locals.

In compliance with the graph, the number of
students
enrolled was mere 20000
people
in 2001.
However
, by 2010, the indicator has rocketed to the whopping 80000
students
. It is
also
worth mentioning, that the graph has not
got
any
highly
visible oscillations over the whole period of time.

According to the lower line, it is obvious that the growth in the number of foreign
students
enrolled in the Australian university was not
so
drastical
as of local
people
. The initial quantity of overseas
people
being enrolled
in the university constitutes in the
neighbourhood
of 12000
students
, and then after a steady increase from 2001 to 2008 its indicator became equal to 30000 foreigners. Thereafter, within one year from 2008 to 2009 it jumped
sharply
and after a
further
tiny rise from 2009 to 2010, it accomplished its peak of
nearly
42000
students
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts