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Carbonated drink Manufacturing PRocess

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The given Picture illustrates the process involved in the manufacturing of carbonated drinks to supply for supermarkets. Overall, the process involves five stages and begins with filtering the raw water and converting it to soda and filling it in cans or bottles, and packing them into boxes for supply to supermarkets. Initially, the Raw water is transferred into the filter and then it is processed into a water softener and treated with chemicals. In the second stage, water is pumped into electric heaters and the hot water is subjected to cooling through a cooling pipe to a carbon dioxide chamber and subjected to carbonation and then the carbonated water is sent into the mixing tank through a long pipe where it undergoes coloring and added with syrup and flavor. Subsequently, in the fourth stage, the mixed carbonated drink is now filled into bottles and cans through the filter and packed into carton boxes. Meanwhile, the fifth stage which is also the final stage packaged boxes is transported to the supermarkets.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 Picture illustrates the process involved in the manufacturing of carbonated drinks to supply for supermarkets.

Overall
, the process involves five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with filtering the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and converting it to soda and filling it in cans or bottles, and packing them into boxes for supply to supermarkets.

Initially
, the Raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is transferred
 into the filter and then it is processed
 into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener and treated with chemicals. In the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 into electric heaters and the hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is subjected
 to cooling through a cooling pipe to a carbon dioxide chamber and subjected to carbonation and then the carbonated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into the mixing tank through a long pipe where it undergoes coloring and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with syrup and flavor. Subsequently
, in the fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the mixed carbonated drink is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 filled into bottles and cans through the filter and packed into carton boxes. Meanwhile, the fifth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 which is also
 the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 packaged boxes is transported
 to the supermarkets. 