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The charts below give information about world spending and population.

The charts below give information about world spending and population. PVVrd
The two pie graph provides data about the percentage of global expenditure and population in different countries. It is vivid that, the maximum percentage of global money spend on others with 40%. In comparison, the percentage of housing is six times less than transport by spending expense approximately 12%, 18% and 24%, respectively. The minimum percentage of spending wealth on clothing about 6%. Probing further, the highest proportion of the world population is living in Asia with 57%. In similarity, a nearly similar percentage of people who are living in Europe and Americas nearly 14% orderly. The 10%population is living in Asia. The least proportion of people live in others with 5%. In conclusion, the maximum percentage of expenditure spend on others, whereas the minimum population is living in other countries.
The two pie graph provides data about the
percentage
of global expenditure and
population
in
different
countries.

It is vivid that, the maximum
percentage
of global money spend on others with 40%.
In comparison
, the
percentage
of housing is six times less than transport by spending expense approximately 12%, 18% and 24%,
respectively
. The minimum
percentage
of spending wealth on clothing about 6%.

Probing
further
, the highest proportion of the world
population
is
living
in Asia with 57%. In similarity, a
nearly
similar
percentage
of
people
who are
living
in Europe and Americas
nearly
14% orderly. The
10%population
is
living
in Asia. The least proportion of
people
live
in others with 5%.

In conclusion
, the maximum
percentage
of expenditure spend on others, whereas the minimum
population
is
living
in
other
countries.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about world spending and population.

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