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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip it is now, and plans for its development

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip it is now, and plans for its development BJJM6
The maps illustrate the current and predicted future Islip town centre. Overall, it is clear from the maps that some pedestrianisation is planned for shopping and housing area, while a new road for vehicles is planned to frame this area. Focusing on the current map, the town center is developed around a main road, which stretches from the west to the east. There are many shops to the north and to the south of the road. Whilst it is mainly consisted of the countryside in the north, a big area is occupied by housing in the south. This area is limited by a park in the east and a school in the south-west. Both of these structures are connected to the main road by side roads. Moving on to the predictions, a circular road that goes around the city center attracts attention. This road expected to be built is a dual carriageway. The middle part of the main road is projected to be pedestrianised. Although the southern part of Islip is not designated to see big changes other than some new housing and a shrink in the size of the park, there are many changes planned for the northern part. Shops in this part will be demolished and a shopping centre and a housing area will be introduced. A bus station and a parking area are also planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.
The maps illustrate the
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current
and predicted future
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Islip
town
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centre
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the maps that
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some
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pedestrianisation
is
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planned
for shopping and housing
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area
, while a new
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road
for vehicles is
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planned
to frame this area.

Focusing on the
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current
map, the town center
is developed
around a main
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road
, which stretches from the west to the east. There are
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many
shops to the north and to the south of the
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road
. Whilst it is
mainly
consisted of the countryside in the north, a
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big
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area
is occupied
by housing in the south. This
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area
is limited
by a park in the east and a school in the south-west. Both of these structures
are connected
to the main
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road
by side roads.

Moving on to the predictions, a circular
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road
that goes around the city center attracts attention. This
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road
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expected
to
be built
is a dual carriageway. The middle
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part
of the main
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road
is projected
to be
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pedestrianised
. Although the southern
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part
of
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Islip
is not designated to
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see
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big
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changes
other than
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some
new housing and a shrink in the size of the park, there are
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many
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changes
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planned
for the northern
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part
. Shops in this
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part
will
be demolished
and a shopping
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centre
and a housing
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area
will
be introduced
. A bus station and a parking
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area
are
also
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planned
to
be built
to the west and the east of the shopping
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centre
,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip it is now, and plans for its development

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