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The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.

The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire. PVVWX
The table compares the budgets needed for retired singles and couples to live a comfortable lifestyle in Australia. Overall, the average budget of a retired single person is much lower than that of a couple. In addition, while housing is the biggest expenditure for single retirees, retired couples need more money for leisure activities. The expenditure for housing of retired single people is $184, which is $10 lower than that of couples. Meanwhile, singles retirees spend $140 on leisure activities, while couples spend $60 more. Regarding healthcare, couples spend $177, which is $50 higher than the expenditure of a single retired person. In terms of transport, couples and singles need roughly the same amount of money, at $108 and $107 respectively. When it comes to clothing, food, and other things, the figure for an individual is almost half that of a couple. A single person spends $44, $50 and $37 respectively on these categories, while a couple spends $80, $100 and $70. In general, the total amount of money spent by an individual is $684, whereas the figure for a couple is $931.
The table compares the budgets needed for
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retired
singles and
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to
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live
a comfortable lifestyle in Australia.

Overall
, the average budget of a
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retired
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single
person is much lower than that of a

couple.
In addition
, while housing is the biggest expenditure for
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single
retirees,
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retired
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couples
need more money for leisure activities.

The expenditure for housing of
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retired
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single
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people
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is
$184, which is $10 lower than that of
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couples
. Meanwhile, singles retirees
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spend
$140 on leisure activities, while
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couples
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spend
$60 more. Regarding healthcare,
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couples
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spend
$177, which is $50 higher than the expenditure of a
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single
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retired
person.

In terms of transport,
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couples
and singles need roughly the same amount of money, at $108 and $107
respectively
. When it
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comes
to clothing, food, and other things, the figure for an individual is almost half that of a
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couple
. A
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single
person
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spends
$44, $50 and $37
respectively
on these categories, while a
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couple
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spends
$80, $100 and $70.
In general
, the total amount of money spent by an individual is $684, whereas the figure for a
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couple
is $931.
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IELTS academic The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.

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