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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph, shows the total number of national and international students enrolled in the Australian universities, for ten years from the year 2001-2010. Firstly, coming to the overseas students, there was an increase in the number from the year 2001 to 2010. Moreover, one can notice the increase as the curve from up to the year 2009. However, the result is uniform from 2009 to 2010. The number, reached 20000 at the year 2006. Coming to the total students, the graph has increased linearly with slight changes in some years. Secondly, the graph is different for the natives. It was almost 20000 at the year 2001, which increased to a peak in the year 2002, and there was a down in the curve upto the year 2006. It further increased to the year 2008, with a sharp point and it further decreased. In the total students, the curve increased from 40000 to 60000, in the year 2007, which is uniform up to the year 2010.

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