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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram briefs about the national as well as international students who have enrolled themselves in Australian universities over a decade. There has been a gradual growth of international students commencing from 2001 to 2010, although the scenario and graph for national students in Australia are different. Students studying abroad in 2001 has marked at 20000, the digits have increased enormously through the decade making the final count of 80000 and above in 2010. Whereas, commencing started below 20000 in 2001 but managed to reach 40000 by 2010. A number of students studying in total their own country, where 400000 in 2001 and the numbers increased till 600000 in 2007. From 2007 to 2010 the range it been constant.
The diagram briefs about the national
as well
as international
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students
who have enrolled themselves in Australian universities over a decade.

There has been a gradual growth of international
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students
commencing from 2001 to 2010, although the scenario and graph for national
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students
in Australia are
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different
.

Students studying abroad in 2001 has marked at 20000, the digits have increased
enormously
through the decade making the final count of 80000 and above in 2010. Whereas, commencing
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started
below 20000 in 2001
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but
managed to reach 40000 by 2010.

A number of
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students
studying in total their
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own
country, where 400000 in 2001 and the numbers increased till 600000 in 2007. From 2007 to 2010 the range it
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been
constant.

IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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119 words
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.