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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. BBR6
According to the overseas student graph, there was a drastic increase in the total number of students from 2001 to 2010, approximately a 30% increase. Also, an increase in the commencing students can be observed over these 10 years but remained almost constant in the years 2009 and 2010. As seen in the local students' graph, an increase can be seen in the total number of students, but not as much as the overseas students. A fluctuation can be seen in the commencing students in the duration of 10 years. The total number of students remained constant from the year 2007 till 2010. Even though commencing started with a great increase rate in 2002, it did fall in the next following years. When both graphs are compared, is seen that the locals are dominating in numbers in both the categories, but the percent increase is greater in the international students. There is always a drastic increase in the overseas student graph and never a fall, unlike the local students.
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from 2001 to 2010, approximately a 30%
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remained almost constant in the years 2009 and 2010.

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in the local students'
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not as much as the overseas
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in the commencing
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in the duration of 10 years. The total
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remained constant from the
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2007 till 2010.

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rate in 2002, it did fall in the
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When both
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in both the categories,
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the percent
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is greater in the international
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. There is always a drastic
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in the overseas
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and never a fall, unlike the local
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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