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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. writing-task-1-ielts-pie-chart-yemen-italy Source: Cambridge English IELTS Past Papers

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. eLkp
The given pie charts show data on the population ages in Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and also estimation of the population for the year 2050. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of youngest age group is expected to fall by 2050, in contrast to the older age group. Meanwhile, middle age group of Yemen expected to increase while Italy’s middle age group is expected to decrease. According to first two pie-charts, Yemen’s middle age group falls by about 10% which was previously accounted for 46. 3. The proportion of older age group with increased by almost double (5. 7%) where youngest age group will decreased about a quarter by 2050. Looking at the Italy population, older age group occupies almost quarter of the total population in2000, which will significantly grow by approximately 20% in2050. While the middle age group shares the largest proportion in 2000at 61. 6% will reduce to 46. 2% by 2050. However, youngest age group will just decreased by 3%.
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in Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and
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for the year 2050.

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. Meanwhile,
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of Yemen
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to increase while Italy’s
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falls by about 10% which was previously accounted for 46. 3. The proportion of older
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with increased by almost double (5. 7%) where
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about a quarter by 2050.

Looking at the Italy
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, older
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occupies almost quarter of the total
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population
in2000, which will
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grow by approximately 20% in2050. While the
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middle
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shares the largest proportion in 2000at 61. 6% will
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,
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decreased by 3%.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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  • The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. writing-task-1-ielts-pie-chart-yemen-italy Source: Cambridge English IELTS Past Papers