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The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004. 2GOb
The given bar graph illustrates information about the amount of money doctors and other labourer got paid in seven different countries: France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland, Switzerland and the US in a particular year, 2004. At first glance, doctors in all the seven countries were paid significantly more than other workers. Another point standing out is that the US workers earned the most in both the medical profession and other occupations. Looking at the details, doctors in the most countries were paid more than twice as much as other labourers’ salary except for in Switzerland where doctors were paid around $70, 000 while other workers were paid $40, 000. In three countries: Italy, Czech Republic, and Germany, the income of the other labourer was only one-third of their counterparts’ salary. Workers except for doctors earned approximately $20, 000 on average whilst doctors made over $60, 000 apiece. As regards American doctor, they earned the most among these seven countries with $120, 000 annual income, whereas other workers also had the highest income of all seven countries at just over $40, 000, which means the doctor tripled the income of other labourers.
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labourer
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countries
: France, Italy, Czech Republic, Germany, Finland, Switzerland and the US in a particular year, 2004. At
first
glance,
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doctors
in all the seven
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were
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significantly
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other
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workers
. Another point standing out is that the US
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earned the most in both the medical profession and
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occupations.

Looking at the
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,
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doctors
in the most
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paid
more than twice as much as
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labourers
’ salary
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in Switzerland where
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doctors
were
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around $70, 000 while
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other
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were
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$40, 000. In three
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: Italy, Czech Republic, and Germany, the
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one-third of their counterparts’ salary.
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except for
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doctors
earned approximately $20, 000 on average whilst
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doctors
made over $60, 000 apiece.

As regards American
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doctor
, they earned the most among these seven
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countries
with $120, 000 annual
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income
, whereas
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other
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workers
also
had the highest
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of all seven
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over $40, 000, which means the
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doctor
tripled the
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labourers
.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

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