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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graph demonstrates the enrolment of both overseas and local students in Australian universities in ten years from 2001 to 2010. It has been observed that the enrolment in Australian universities is increasing gradually from 2001 to 2010. The majority of the overseas students are taking admissions in the universities of Australia comparatively to local residents. The trend increases from 20, 000 students and reached 81, 000 over a ten year period. However, there was a moderate drop of 2000 students in getting admissions by overseas students during 2003. On the other hand, only a few thousand local students enrolled in Australian universities. The number starts from around 18, 000 and reached only 40, 000 students during these ten years. Among these years, there was a slight decrease in students' enrolment during 2006 with 200 students. To conclude, it is shown that the majority of international students prefer studying from Australian universities than residents of Australia.

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