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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts compare the proportion of the present items of nutrients in two different types of dinners. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that the quantity of carbohydrates is the highest in both, but in medium baked potato saturated fats are the lowest, while in macaroni other nutrients are the least. In terms of carbohydrates, it is contributed to 52% in macaroni and a higher as compared with medium baked potato, which is represented to 35%. Regarding proteins, it is almost relatively double in potato in contrast to macaroni, which is 25% and 11% respectively. With regard to glucose, it has a minor difference between both types, contributed to 15% and 11% in potato and macaroni. In macaroni, saturated fats are double in amount, by contrast, potato witnessed to 21% and 10% sequentially. Other nutrients represented more than double in potato in comparison with macaroni, contributed to 15% and 5% respectively.

The pie charts compare the proportion of the present items of nutrients in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 types of dinners. It is measured
 in percentages.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the quantity of carbohydrates is the highest in both, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in medium baked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 saturated fats are the lowest, while in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
 other nutrients are the least.

In terms of carbohydrates, it is contributed
 to 52% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
 and a higher Comparison requires “than”, not ‘then’ nor ‘as’.than
as
 compared with medium baked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
, which is represented
 to 35%. Regarding proteins, it is almost relatively
 double in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
in contrast
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
, which is 25% and 11% respectively
.

With regard to glucose, it has a minor difference between both types, contributed to 15% and 11% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
. In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
, saturated fats are double in amount, by contrast, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 witnessed to 21% and 10% sequentially
. Other nutrients represented more than double in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
in comparison
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtortellinispaghettipenne
macaroni
, contributed to 15% and 5% respectively
. 