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The chart provides information about a problem in rural and urban areas of Australia which happened in the year 2012 on the rate of unemployment.

The chart provides information about a problem in rural and urban areas of Australia which happened in the year 2012 on the rate of unemployment. All in all, the rate of unemployment in rural areas contributed more, whereas in urban areas the job opportunities were slightly more when compared to the former. In accordance with the first quarters of the year, initially it was 6. 5% and has a downward trend of 4% on the rate of unemployment, following this fashion, the chart represents a rise in jobless upto the third quarters of the year and again it rose sharply then fell slightly within that period. Along with some fluctuations, the graph went up a little and experienced a drop with 5% in the fourth quarters of the year. On the other hand, it is a well known truth that urban areas always contribute to a rise in job vacancies and thus remained lower in the unemployment rate when compared to the rural areas. Firstly starting with the rate of 2% in unemployment which then increased sharply upto 4% in the second quarters of the year. It then had fluctuations and despite the criteria that urban areas provide some job opportunities the unemployment rates rose markedly around 5% nearly meeting the situation as that was in urban areas.
The chart provides information about a problem in rural and
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urban
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areas
of Australia which happened in the
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year
2012 on the
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rate
of unemployment.

All in all, the
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rate
of
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unemployment
in rural
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areas
contributed more, whereas in
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urban
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areas
the job opportunities were
slightly
more when compared to the former.

In accordance with the
first
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quarters
of the
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year
,
initially
it was 6. 5% and has a downward trend of 4% on the
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rate
of
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unemployment
, following this fashion, the chart represents a rise in jobless
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upto
the third
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quarters
of the
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year
and again it rose
sharply
then fell
slightly
within that period. Along with
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some
fluctuations, the graph went up a
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little
and experienced a drop with 5% in the fourth
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quarters
of the year.

On the other hand
, it is a well known truth that
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urban
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areas
always contribute to a rise in job vacancies and
thus
remained lower in the
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unemployment
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rate
when compared to the rural
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areas
.
Firstly
starting with the
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rate
of 2% in
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unemployment
which then increased
sharply
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upto
4% in the second
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quarters
of the
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year
. It then had fluctuations and despite the criteria that
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urban
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areas
provide
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some
job opportunities the
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unemployment
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rates
rose
markedly
around 5%
nearly
meeting the situation as that was in
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urban
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IELTS academic The chart provides information about a problem in rural and urban areas of Australia which happened in the year 2012 on the rate of unemployment.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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