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The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries

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The number of population has been increasing nowadays. These numbers could be found from data population's of the three countries, such as Canada, Germany, and UK. In 1988, UK had 14. 23 percentage of the population aged 65 and above. Along with it, there was Canada had 16. 32 in percentage. And the highest percentage was in Germany with percentage of population aged more than 65 years old was 20. 45.
The number of population has been increasing nowadays. These numbers could
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from data population's of the three countries, such as Canada, Germany, and UK. In 1988, UK had 14. 23
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of the population aged 65 and above. Along with it, there was Canada had 16. 32 in
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. And the highest
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was in Germany with
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of population aged more than 65 years
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was 20. 45.
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IELTS academic The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries

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