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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 0A679
The figures illustrate the number of international and local students who enrolled in the university in Australia between 2001 to 2010. While the number of international students was growing, the number of local students was fluctuating over a decade period. In 2001, the number of new international applicants of the university in Australia is around 10000 pupils and it had an inclined trend. However, the trend was weakling in 2010 because the enrollment number was not as high as in previous years, it only had around 40000 new applicants. It made the total number of foreign college students in Australia from 20000 in 2001 and rocketed to 80000 in 2010. On the other hand, the number of new local applicants was noticeable fluctuate between 2001 to 2010. It had approximately 200000 new students every year. The locals were indeed the majority in the universities with total students of 400000 in 2001, but the total number was constant around 60000 from 2007 to 2010.
The figures illustrate the
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of international and
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who enrolled in the university in Australia
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between 2001 to 2010
. While the
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of international
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was growing, the
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of
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local
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was fluctuating over a decade period.

In 2001, the
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of
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international applicants of the university in Australia is around 10000 pupils and it had an inclined trend.
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, the trend was weakling in 2010
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the enrollment
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was not as high as in previous years, it
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had around 40000
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applicants. It made the total
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of foreign college
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in Australia from 20000 in 2001 and rocketed to 80000 in 2010.

On the other hand
, the
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of
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applicants was noticeable fluctuate
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between 2001 to 2010
. It had approximately 200000
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every year. The
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were
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the majority in the universities with total
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of 400000 in 2001,
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the total
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was constant around 60000 from 2007 to 2010.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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