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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. BJMnp
The given bar graph illustrates information about environment problem levels by three kind of causes namely like Electricity generation, Transport and Industry among four different nationas in 2021. Overall, it can be seen that China show the highest ppm rate in given three causes. However, Australic and Japan creates low level air pollution. In 2021, air pollution level is reached 80ppm by China's industry as compared to Japan with around 40ppm. However, America and Japan create low air pollution by industry, with approximately 30ppm and 19ppm respectively. In contrast, America generate under 60ppm air level by trasport system which is higher than Australic with under 20ppm and china make approximately 70ppm air level by transport as opposted to almost 41ppm with Japan. On the other hand, in tearm of electricity generation, chain produce just under 60ppm air pollution which is higher than other three countries with: over 30ppm of America, 18ppm of Japan and under 20ppm of Australia.
The
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given
bar graph illustrates information about environment problem
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levels
by three
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kind
of causes
namely
like Electricity generation, Transport and Industry among four
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different
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nationas
in 2021.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that China
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show
the highest ppm rate in
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given
three causes.
However
,
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Australic
and
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Japan
creates low
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level
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air
pollution.

In 2021,
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air
pollution
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level
is reached
80ppm by China's industry as compared to
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Japan
with around 40ppm.
However
, America and
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Japan
create low
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air
pollution by industry, with approximately 30ppm and 19ppm
respectively
.
In contrast
, America
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generate
under 60ppm
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air
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level
by
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trasport
system which is higher than
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Australic
with under 20ppm and china
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make
approximately 70ppm
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air
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level
by transport as
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opposted
to almost 41ppm with Japan.

On the other hand
, in
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tearm
of electricity generation, chain produce
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just
under 60ppm
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air
pollution which is higher than other three countries with: over 30ppm of America, 18ppm of
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Japan
and under 20ppm of Australia.
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IELTS academic The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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