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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 7arb6
As it is apparent, the graph illustrates the enrollments of both foreign and local undergraduate in Australian universities for more than a ten-year duration. To begin with, I would like to point out that according to the graph for pupil from abroad and also the local ones the commencing line is overall ascending on the contrary with a bit of difference which is that a descending time period from 2002 to 2006 can be viewed one the local pupil graph. In addition, the maximum number of enrollment for overseas undergraduate is less than the one for local pupil with it being approximately 80000 and the other being 600000. Also, the total line that belongs to local scholar seems that it has stopped growing in number after 2007 whereas in the other graph the digit of enrollment is consistently increasing. In general, it appears that the graph that is for foreign graduate has had a much more growth rate in comparison to the junior that are a part of the Australian community during this period of time.
As it is apparent, the
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illustrates the enrollments of both foreign and
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undergraduate in Australian universities for more than a ten-year duration.

To
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begin
with, I would like to point out that according to the
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graph
for pupil from abroad and
also
the
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local
ones the commencing line is
overall
ascending
on the contrary
with a bit of difference which is that a descending time period from 2002 to 2006 can
be viewed
one the
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local
pupil graph.

In addition
, the maximum number of enrollment for overseas undergraduate is less than the one for
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local
pupil with it being approximately 80000 and the other being 600000.

Also
, the total line that belongs to
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local
scholar seems that it has
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stopped
growing in number after 2007 whereas in the other
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graph
the digit of enrollment is
consistently
increasing.

In general
, it appears that the
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graph
that is
for foreign graduate has had a much more growth rate
in comparison
to the junior that are a part of the Australian community during this period of time.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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