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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. 1512q
The bar chart illustrates proportion of living in urban areas in different six regions in the years 1950, 2007, 2050. Overall, it can be observed that it is going to supplement steadily on the rate of living in town in these periods. In details, while the rate of Africa and Asia areas had 15-17 percent, researchers think that it is going to augment significantly 62-66 percent in 1950 and 2050, respectively. Nevertheless, the living people ratio of Latin America-Caribbean rose nearly doubling up in this period. While the region was 42 percent in 1950, these percentages are going to go up 89 percent in 2050. In 1950, the rate of Europe area had 51 percent afterwards, in 2007 it soared to 72 percent. The rate will be envisaged to be 84 percent. In centennial periods, while rate of living was 64 percent in 1950, this percentage is going to be 90 percent in 2050 in North America. The ratio of Oceania area had the least change in between 5 different regions. This proportion of area climbed 9 percent from 1950 to 2007. According to graph table, the rate of Oceania is going to be expanded by 76 percent.
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ratio of Latin America-Caribbean rose
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in 1950, these percentages are going to go up 89
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afterwards, in 2007 it soared to 72
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in 1950, this percentage is going to be 90
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

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