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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW ELECTRICITY IS GENERATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION d378X
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE VARIOUS STEPS WHICH INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION OF ELECTRIC CURRENT THROUGH A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. OVERALL THE GENERATION OF ELECTRICTY CONSISTS OF DIFFERENT STAGES, WHICH STARTS FROM THE RIVER WATER AND LATER IT WILL BE CONVERTED TO ELECTRIC POWER. THIS PROCESS WILL HAPPEN AT DAY AND NIGHT. THE WATER FROM THE RIVER FLOWS TO A HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR WHERE THERE IS A DAM NEAR BY IT. DURING DAY TIME, THE DAM WILL BE OPENED AND THE WATER FLOWS THROUGH IT AND TO GENERATE POWER IT REACHES THE POWER STATION WHICH HAS A GENERATOR AND IT WORKS AS REVERSIBLE TURBINES WHEN IT IS NOT NIGHT AND FURTHER IT WILL BE GENERATED AS POWER LINES AND WILL BE SUPPLIED TO THE NATIONAL GRIDS. ALSO THE REMAINING WATER WILL BE CARRIED TO A LOW LEVEL RESERVOIR. ON THE OTHER HAND AT NIGHT THE RIVER WATER FROM THE LOW-LEVEL RESERVOIR WILL BE CARRIED BACK TO THE GENERATOR, FROM THERE IT WILL BE PUMPED BACK TO THE HIGH LEVEL RESERVOIR WHER THE DAM WILL BE CLOSED.
THE DIAGRAM ILLUSTRATES THE VARIOUS STEPS WHICH INVOLVED IN THE PRODUCTION OF ELECTRIC
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CURRENT
THROUGH A HYDROELECTRIC
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POWER
STATION.

OVERALL
THE GENERATION OF
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ELECTRICTY
CONSISTS OF
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DIFFERENT
STAGES, WHICH
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STARTS
FROM THE RIVER
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WATER
AND LATER IT WILL
BE CONVERTED
TO ELECTRIC
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POWER
. THIS PROCESS WILL HAPPEN AT DAY AND NIGHT.

THE
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WATER
FROM THE RIVER FLOWS TO A HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR WHERE THERE IS A DAM
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NEAR BY
IT. DURING DAY TIME, THE DAM WILL
BE OPENED
AND THE
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WATER
FLOWS THROUGH IT AND TO GENERATE
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POWER
IT REACHES THE
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POWER
STATION WHICH HAS A GENERATOR AND IT WORKS AS REVERSIBLE TURBINES WHEN IT IS NOT NIGHT AND
FURTHER
IT WILL
BE GENERATED
AS
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POWER
LINES AND WILL
BE SUPPLIED
TO THE NATIONAL GRIDS.
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ALSO
THE REMAINING
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WATER
WILL
BE CARRIED
TO A LOW LEVEL RESERVOIR.

ON THE OTHER HAND
AT NIGHT THE RIVER
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WATER
FROM THE LOW-LEVEL RESERVOIR WILL
BE CARRIED
BACK TO THE GENERATOR, FROM THERE IT WILL
BE PUMPED
BACK TO THE HIGH LEVEL RESERVOIR
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WHER
THE DAM WILL
BE CLOSED
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