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task 1 pie chart nutrients

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The pie charts depict how much percentage of the three different nutrients, which is harmful to the body if it exceeds a certain limit, is consumed in each average meal in the united states of America. Overall, Sodium and saturated fat is mostly consumed in the dinner while added sugar is largely intaken by snacks. Lunch packs in all three nutrients at a good percentage. All the three nutrients are least found in the breakfast with all three of them being in the lowest percentages. Sodium is consumed in the highest percentage in the dinner getting around 43% while on the contrary breakfast and snacks share the same low spot claiming only 14% each on the sodium intake chart. Lunch do get a handful of sodium cloaking in around 29% of the sodium intake. Dinner has the highest amount of saturated fat out of all the meals while breakfast gets the lowest getting around 16% share in the chart. Lunch positions itself as the second highest meal that contains saturated fat and snacks takes the third place securing 21% in the data. Added sugar is consumed in large quantities just short of half the pie chart by snacks. All the other meals compete around the graph with 16, 19 and 23 percentages by breakfast, lunch and dinner respectively.
The pie
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charts
depict how much
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percentage
of the three
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different
nutrients, which is harmful to the body if it exceeds a certain limit, is
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consumed
in each average
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meal
in the
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united states of America
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Overall
, Sodium and saturated
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fat
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mostly
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consumed
in the dinner while
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added
sugar is
largely
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intaken
by
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snacks
. Lunch packs in all three nutrients at a
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good
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percentage
. All the three nutrients are least found in the
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breakfast
with all three of them being in the lowest percentages.

Sodium is
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consumed
in the highest
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percentage
in the dinner getting
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around
43% while
on the contrary
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breakfast
and
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snacks
share the same low spot claiming
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only
14% each on the sodium intake
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chart
. Lunch do
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get
a handful of sodium cloaking in
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around
29% of the sodium intake.

Dinner has the highest amount of saturated
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fat
out of all the
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meals
while
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breakfast
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gets
the lowest getting
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around
16% share in the
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chart
. Lunch positions itself as the second highest
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meal
that contains saturated
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fat
and
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snacks
takes the third place securing 21% in the data.

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Added
sugar is
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consumed
in large quantities
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just
short of half the pie
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chart
by
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snacks
. All the other
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meals
compete
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around
the graph with 16, 19 and 23
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percentages
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breakfast
, lunch and dinner
respectively
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IELTS academic task 1 pie chart nutrients

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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