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The graph indicates data about the number of cars that people have in the UK between 1975 and 2005.

The graph indicates data about the number of cars that people have in the UK between 1975 and 2005. GLVxQ
The graph indicates data about the number of cars that people have in the UK between 1975 and 2005. Overall what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of people who own one car took the highest percent from 1975 to 2005, while the percentage of people have 3 cars which saw a lowest percent in many years. It is clear that, as regards the percentages of people have one car started at 45%in 1995 which the highest percant and then the firgue declined significantly just under 40% in the next ten years. After that went up dramatically, finishing at 46%in 2005. Look at the number of people no car which saw a significant fall above 40% to 25% in 1975, 1985 respectively. The firgue then levelled off ảound 25% in the last 20 years. As can be seen, the number of people own 2 car saw a considerable rise from above 5% in 1975 to under 20% in 2005. While there were gruadual increased in the number of people who have 3 cars, jus ảound 5% to 10% from 1975 to 2002
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took the highest percent from 1975 to 2005, while the percentage of
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have 3
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and then the
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under 40% in the
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a significant fall above 40% to 25% in 1975, 1985
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then levelled off
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25% in the last 20 years.

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saw
a considerable rise from above 5% in 1975 to under 20% in 2005. While there were
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