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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. e5bRV
The bar charts above indicate the general level of computer ownership between 2002 and 2010 and its relationship with person’s education level in 2002 and 2010. General pattern shows a gradual increase in the number of people having computer throughout the years, and having a postgraduate degree increases the likelihood of owning a computer in 2002 as in 2010. It can be seen from the bar chart describing the period of ownership, there is no rapid surge in computer ownership between starting value 55% and ending with 70%. On the contrary, the increment was never more than 5% a year. In 2002, the relationship between the level of education and computer ownership is mostly linear, as the higher qualification a person gets the more possibility of owning a computer. However, the relationship gets more exponential in 2010, after a certain point the difference in likelihood of computer ownership with having additional qualifications is minimal, no more than 8%. To sum up, it is easier to have a computer with minimum qualifications in 2010 than it was to have it in 2002.
The bar charts above indicate the general level of computer
ownership
between 2002 and 2010 and its relationship with person’s education level in 2002 and 2010. General pattern
shows
a gradual increase in the number of
people
having computer throughout the years, and having a postgraduate degree increases the likelihood of owning a computer in 2002 as in 2010.

It can be
seen
from the bar chart describing the period of
ownership
, there is no rapid surge in computer
ownership
between starting value 55% and ending with 70%.
On the contrary
, the increment was never more than 5% a year.

In 2002, the relationship between the level of education and computer
ownership
is
mostly
linear, as the higher qualification a person
gets
the more possibility of owning a computer.
However
, the relationship
gets
more exponential in 2010, after a certain point the difference in likelihood of computer
ownership
with having additional qualifications is minimal, no more than 8%.

To sum up, it is easier to have a computer with minimum qualifications in 2010 than it was to have it in 2002.
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IELTS academic The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

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