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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. 56L5B
Here the provided line graph represents that the data about crime committed in panama city from the year 2010 to the year 2019. Overall, it is worth noticing that robbery had low cases in given time with compare to other to crimes burglary and car theft. A glance of line graph illustrates that in 2010, around 750 cases of robbery were observed. Followed to that haphazard trend is noted for robbery from 2010 to the end of the given year. Hence forth, in 2019 nearly 700 cases were witnessed for robbery. However, in terms of burglary cases hiked for a year, after 2011 cases of burglary plummeted form 2011 to 2015 after 2015 cases again inclined to 2019. Further analysis of line suggests that haphazard trend is noted for car theft from the year 2010 to 2019. In 2010 and in 2019 cases of car theft were below 3000 and around 2700 respectively.
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2010 to the
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2019.
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robbery
had low cases in
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time with compare to other to crimes burglary and car theft. A glance of line graph illustrates that in 2010, around 750 cases of
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robbery
were observed
. Followed to that haphazard trend
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robbery
from 2010 to the
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Hence
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nearly
700 cases
were witnessed
for
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robbery
.
However
, in terms of burglary cases hiked for a
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year
, after 2011 cases of burglary plummeted form 2011 to 2015 after 2015 cases again inclined to 2019.
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analysis of line suggests that haphazard trend
is noted
for car theft from the
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2010 to 2019. In 2010 and in 2019 cases of car theft were below 3000 and around 2700
respectively
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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