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The two maps illustrate changes in the geographical region of Denham over the years, right from 1986. In general, Denham has become more crowded in terms of accommodation over the years.  In the first map, which is dated back to 1986, Denham was having limited residential areas with more farmlands. Furthermore, Primary school comprised of a single building with two shops and a post office nearby. The residential buildings were mainly concentrated near the upper-central part of the town. In the center of the town was a large house with a garden surrounding it. To the west one can see the river stoke, which is still flowing near the town with a bridge in its upper part to connect this town to the west. However, turning to the second map, the number of accommodations has increased two to three times between 1986 and the present, Moreover, Primary school now has more buildings supporting the population needs. But the shops which were seen back in 1986 are not around today. The large hou

The two maps illustrate changes in the geographical region of Denham over the years, right from 1986. In general, Denham has become more crowded in terms of accommodation over the years. In the first map, which is dated back to 1986, Denham was having limited residential areas with more farmlands. Furthermore, Primary school comprised of a single building with two shops and a post office nearby. The residential buildings were mainly concentrated near the upper-central part of the town. In the center of the town was a large house with a garden surrounding it. To the west one can see the river stoke, which is still flowing near the town with a bridge in its upper part to connect this town to the west. However, turning to the second map, the number of accommodations has increased two to three times between 1986 and the present, Moreover, Primary school now has more buildings supporting the population needs. But the shops which were seen back in 1986 are not around today. The large hou YLdgr
The two maps illustrate changes in the geographical region of Denham over the years, right from 1986. In general, Denham has become more crowded in terms of accommodation over the years. In the first map, which is dated back to 1986, Denham was having limited residential areas with more farmlands. Furthermore, Primary school comprised of a single building with two shops and a post office nearby. The residential buildings were mainly concentrated near the upper-central part of the town. In the center of the town was a large house with a garden surrounding it. To the west one can see the river stoke, which is still flowing near the town with a bridge in its upper part to connect this town to the west. However, turning to the second map, the number of accommodations has increased two to three times between 1986 and the present, Moreover, Primary school now has more buildings supporting the population needs. But the shops which were seen back in 1986 are not around today. The large house in 1986 is now converted into a retirement home with even more constructional elements, and farmlands are now replaced with houses. Now, these houses have extended to the southern area, thus now houses are not concentrated in the upper central part instead cover the whole central line. Overall, town has now become more populated due to the fact that number of accommodation has increased and taken place of previous farmlands since 1986.
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Denham
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map, which
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Denham
was having limited residential areas with more farmlands.
Furthermore
, Primary school comprised of a single building with two shops and a post office nearby. The residential buildings were
mainly
concentrated near the upper-central part of the
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town
. In the center of the
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was a large
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with a garden surrounding it. To the west one can
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the river stoke, which is
still
flowing near the
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town
with a bridge in its upper part to connect this
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to the west.

However
, turning to the second map, the number of accommodations has increased two to three times between 1986 and the present,
Moreover
, Primary school
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has more buildings supporting the population needs.
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the shops which were
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back in 1986 are not around
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. The large
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converted into a retirement home with even more constructional elements, and farmlands are
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replaced with
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, these
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have extended to the southern area,
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are not concentrated in the upper central part
instead
cover the whole central line.
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,
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town
has
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become more populated due to the fact that number of accommodation has increased and taken place of previous farmlands since 1986.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate changes in the geographical region of Denham over the years, right from 1986. In general, Denham has become more crowded in terms of accommodation over the years. In the first map, which is dated back to 1986, Denham was having limited residential areas with more farmlands. Furthermore, Primary school comprised of a single building with two shops and a post office nearby. The residential buildings were mainly concentrated near the upper-central part of the town. In the center of the town was a large house with a garden surrounding it. To the west one can see the river stoke, which is still flowing near the town with a bridge in its upper part to connect this town to the west. However, turning to the second map, the number of accommodations has increased two to three times between 1986 and the present, Moreover, Primary school now has more buildings supporting the population needs. But the shops which were seen back in 1986 are not around today. The large hou

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