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The three pie charts depict the annual spending in a school in the United Kingdom in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

The three pie charts depict the annual spending in a school in the United Kingdom in 1981, 1991, and 2001. KwyG9

The three pie charts depict the annual spending in a school in the United Kingdom in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, in the year 1981, the highest amount spent was on teacher’s salaries by 40% followed by 28% on other worker’s salaries. The percentage spent on equipment, furniture and books was 15% each. The least spending was on insurance by 2%. After ten years, in 1991 the diagrams show 50% were paid as teaching staff salaries while 22% were paid as non-teaching staff salaries. Furthermore, 20% was spending was on books and other resources whereas 5% on furniture and equipment and only 3% on insurance. Finally, in 2001, money spent on insurance was increased to 8% however, salaries given to teachers and other staff were 45% and 15% respectively On the contrary 9% was spent on resources like books and stationery and 23% on furniture and equipment.

The three pie charts depict the annual spending in a school in the United Kingdom in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

Overall
, in the year 1981, the highest amount You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 was on teacher’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 by 40% followed by 28% on other worker’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
. The percentage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on equipment, furniture and books was 15% each. The least spending was on insurance by 2%. After ten years, in 1991 the diagrams This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 50% were paid
 as teaching staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 while 22% were paid
 as non-teaching staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
. Furthermore
, 20% was spending was on books and other resources whereas 5% on furniture and equipment and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 3% on insurance. Finally
, in 2001, money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on insurance was increased
 to 8% however
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salaries
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given
 to teachers and other staff were 45% and 15% respectively
On the contrary
 9% was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on resources like books and stationery and 23% on furniture and equipment. 