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The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010

The chart illustrates data of the total percentage of population and their education attainment when obtaining computer sets from year 2002 up to 2010. Overall, in 2010, market calculated the highest number of ownership of computer through out the 5 categories of education. In relation to the picture that was shown, 2010 obtained the highest number of purchased computer with the total of 75% ot the total population. while on the other hand the start of the study which is 2002 only gathered 57%. But we can easily obrserve that there is a constant increase in ownership. While on the other comparison, if we can see based on the ownership by education level. All the five shool levels had a higher number on 2010 compare to 2002. Post graduate qualification marked the highest at almost 98% of them have their computers in 2010, from 70% in 2002. Conversely the non diploma high school has 45% on 2010 which is a big leap from 10% in 2002.
The chart illustrates data of the total percentage of population and their education attainment when obtaining computer sets from year 2002 up to 2010.
Overall
, in 2010, market calculated the highest number of ownership of computer
through out
the 5 categories of education. In relation to the picture that
was shown
, 2010 obtained the highest number of
purchased
computer with the total of 75%
ot
the total population.
while
on the other hand
the
start
of the study which is 2002
only
gathered 57%.
But
we can
easily
obrserve
that there is a constant increase in ownership. While on the other comparison, if we can
see
based on the ownership by education level. All the five
shool
levels had a higher number on 2010 compare to 2002. Post graduate qualification marked the highest at almost 98% of them have their computers in 2010, from 70% in 2002.
Conversely
the non diploma high school has 45% on 2010 which is a
big
leap from 10% in 2002.
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IELTS academic The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010

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