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The given graph is about the enrolments of abroad students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The given graph is about the enrolments of abroad students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. From the graph of overseas students, we can see that there is a steady rise in the number of commencing students from the year 2001 to 2009 and then a bit low rise between the years 2009 to 2010. Then coming to the total number of abroad students there is a very fast rise in the graph from 2001 to 2010. Now looking into the total number of local students, there is a peak rise from the years 2001 to 2006 then it stabilizes from the years 2007 to 2010. When taking the commencing students of local students graph there is only rise in the first year from 2001 to 2001, then there is a gradual decrease in the number of student enrolments from the years 2002 to 2006 and a small increase from the year 2006.
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of abroad
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and local
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students
in Australian universities over a ten
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year
period. From the
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of overseas
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students
, we can
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that there is a steady
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in the
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from the
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2001 to 2009 and then a bit low
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between the years 2009 to 2010. Then coming to the total
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number
of abroad
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students
there is a
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very
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in the
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from 2001 to 2010.

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looking into the total
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number
of local
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students
, there is a peak
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rise
from the years 2001 to 2006 then it stabilizes from the years 2007 to 2010. When taking the commencing
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of local
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there is
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from 2001 to 2001, then there is a gradual decrease in the
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student
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enrolments
from the years 2002 to 2006 and a
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increase from the
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2006.
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IELTS academic The given graph is about the enrolments of abroad students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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