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The chart below gives information about science qualification held by people in two countries.

The line graph illustrates the four different type of categories of science qualification in terms of percentage of people in Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, the percentage of children in no qualification in science is highest in Malaysia and Singapore while master degree students are equal as well as lowest then other categories in both Countries. It is clear from the graph, the proportion of people for no qualification group is highest in Malaysia around 65 percentage compared to the figure for Singapore at only 60 percentage. By contrast, almost 5 percentage of people who hold master degree in both countries, which is the lowest Figure of whole line graph. Other two category of science qualification are accounted half percentage of people compared to no science degree. In Malaysia, the figure for bachelors degree and school leaving exam are only 10 percentage and above a quarter, respectively. The percentage of bachelors degree people is accounted 20 percentage and student who living exam are at 30 percentage in Singapore.
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of children in no
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is highest in Malaysia and Singapore while master
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students are equal
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group is highest in Malaysia around 65
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who hold master
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in both countries, which is the lowest Figure of whole line graph.

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