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The graphics below compares figures for household expenditure in Britain and honkkong in2000

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The circular Chart gives information about the spending on domestic in britain and hongkong in 2000 As we can see, people spent the most money on other goods and services - The percentage was recorded to be 36%. The second place was clinched by food, which made up 22%. People of britain spent slightly on housing than on Transport [18% and 17%]. The last position was bagged by Clothing, which was 7% further analysis of chart reveals that people spend maximum money on Housing amounting to 32%. Housing was followed by other goods and services(28%). The money spent by people of Hongkong on food was three time more than transport. Finally, Clothing was ranked last one which was negligible Overall, the most enpenditure spent in Britain was on other goods and services whereas in hongkong people spent largest the money on Housing And least one was Clothing in both countries
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