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I'm going to talk about my hometown. I was born and raised up in Chi Linh, a provincial city in Hai Duong. Chi Linh was upgraded to a district-level town. If my memories serves me right, in 2019, it became the second provincial city of Hai Duong province. According to the official map, Chi Linh is located in the north of Hai Duong. It’s also known as one of the most bustling districts of the province. We have all the facilities you need. What I love about the city is that it looks contemporary and vibrant even there are a lot of high-rise flats within the city. It’s not hard for you to come across a pavement café. It’s kind of, u know, when you order your coffee in the inside and then come outside on the side walk to enjoy the coffee and watch people walk by which is really nice. However, there’s one thing that I don’t really like about the city is the traffic. Well, I can assure you that Chi Linh traffic is terrible. it’s hectic. Back in the days, when I was still in high school. And considering the fact that the high school is located in the middle of the city, it usually took me about 10-15 mins just to go one mile during the rush hour. Well, there is no fixed rule for the time the traffic jams to happen but it is worst during the rush hour when students flood out of school and go home. Nevertheless, I am incredibly grateful that I was brought up here.
I'm going to talk about my hometown. I
was born
and raised up in Chi
Linh
, a provincial city in
Hai
Duong
. Chi
Linh
was upgraded
to a district-level town. If my memories serves me right, in 2019, it became the second provincial city of
Hai
Duong
province.

According to the official map, Chi Linh
is located
in the north of
Hai
Duong
. It’s
also
known as one of the most bustling districts of the province. We have all the facilities you need. What I
love
about the city is that it looks contemporary and vibrant even there are
a lot of
high-rise flats within the city. It’s not
hard
for you to
come
across a pavement café. It’s kind of, u know, when you order your coffee in the inside and then
come
outside on the side walk to enjoy the coffee and
watch
people
walk by which is
really
nice.

However
, there’s one thing that I don’t
really
like about the city is the traffic. Well, I can assure you that Chi
Linh
traffic is terrible.
it
’s hectic. Back in the days, when I was
still
in high school. And considering the fact that the high school
is located
in the middle of the city, it
usually
took me about 10-15
mins
just
to go one mile during the rush hour. Well, there is no
fixed
rule
for the time the traffic jams to happen
but
it is worst during the rush hour when students flood out of school and go home.

Nevertheless
, I am
incredibly
grateful that I
was brought
up here.
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IELTS academic Describe you hometown or city

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  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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