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The graph show the wheat export on three countries from 1985 to 1990

The graph show the wheat export on three countries from 1985 to 1990 70mY5
A glance at the table provided reveals a number of clear difference among in various three countries: Australia, European comunity and Canada amount of wheat export between 1985 and 1990. Overall, all countries witnessed flactuations, European comunity exports made up second pleace, however at the ending it conisted of first level. Clearly, in 1985, when Canada saw moderately decline from about 20 millions of tonnes to 17. 5 t. However, it went up dramatically to 25 t in 1987 and 1988. 1989 experienced subsquently drop by aproximately 10 wheat exports of Canada. After the plunging, it rose progressively to about 20 t. It is interesting to note that, Canada's wheat exports did not change according to 1985. As regarding Australia, it was the least at the graph in 1985 with 15 t. Before the declining marginally to 12. 5 in, 1988 it saw tediously grow to 16 t in 1986. Next two year, it almost remained the same level until the ending. Regarding Europe comunity, it experienced mildy drop from 17. 5 tto 14 t in 1986. Next two year it witnessed slightly increase to 15 t in 1987 and 1988. 1989 saw moderately raise to aproximately 20 t wheat exports of European comunity. At the final year, it increased slowly to about 21 t.
A glance at the table provided reveals a number of
clear
difference among in various three countries: Australia, European
comunity
and Canada amount of
wheat
export
between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
, all countries witnessed
flactuations
, European
comunity
exports
made up second
pleace
,
however
at the ending it
conisted
of
first
level.
Clearly
, in 1985, when Canada
saw
moderately
decline from about
20 millions of
tonnes to 17. 5 t.
However
, it went up
dramatically
to 25 t in 1987 and 1988. 1989 experienced
subsquently
drop by
aproximately
10
wheat
exports
of Canada. After the plunging, it rose
progressively
to about 20 t. It is interesting to note that, Canada's
wheat
exports
did not
change
according to 1985. As regarding Australia, it was the least at the graph in 1985 with 15 t.
Before
the declining
marginally
to 12. 5 in, 1988 it
saw
tediously
grow to 16 t in 1986.
Next
two year, it almost remained the same level until the ending. Regarding Europe
comunity
, it experienced
mildy
drop from 17. 5
tto
14 t in 1986.
Next
two year it witnessed
slightly
increase to 15 t in 1987 and 1988. 1989
saw
moderately
raise to
aproximately
20 t
wheat
exports
of European
comunity
. At the final year, it increased
slowly
to about 21 t.
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