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The diagrams reflects the life cycle of a large fish which called the salmon. Overall, these species live in different places at their different parts of life. Salmons, use the part with reeds and small stones of upper river for laying their eggs which is quite suitable for the eggs because of the low speed of the water. After their size reaches around 3-8 cm, the fries, which is the name used for salmons between these sizes, moves to lower of the river, where flow is stronger than previous place, and lives there roughly 4 years. When they are big enough, which is between 12 and 15 cm, smolts prepare for a new trip to open sea and spend their life there approximately 5 years. When they became adult and their length reaches to 70-76 cm, adult salmons return to a river has similar conditions with their starting environment to lay their eggs and restart this life cycle for next generation.

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reflects
 the life cycle of a large fish which called the salmon. Overall
, these species This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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different
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different
 parts of life.

Salmons, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the part with reeds and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones of upper river for laying their eggs which is quite suitable for the eggs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the low speed of the water. After their size reaches around 3-8 cm, the fries, which is the name This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for salmons between these sizes, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 to lower of the river, where flow is stronger than previous place, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 there roughly 4 years. When they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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enough
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smolts
 prepare for a new trip to open sea and spend their life there approximately 5 years. When they became adult and their length reaches to 70-76 cm, adult salmons return to a river has similar conditions with their starting environment to lay their eggs and restart this life cycle for next
 generation. 