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The graph tell us about the information of radio and television throughout the day in 1992.

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The graph tell us about the information of radio and television throughout the day in 1992. In detail, on the y-axis the graph represent the information of U. K population. On the other hand, x-axis shows time of whole day. Firstly, in the morning a numerous people were engaging with radio. In spite of, the ratio of person watching television is less than the radio. Secondly at noon 20% people were interested with both radio and television. In the evening, most of the people were prefer to watching TV set. The ratio of radio listeners is too tiny in comparison of station. The last and the least, both radio and T. v are equal in percentage.
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and television throughout the day in 1992. In detail, on the y-axis the graph represent the information of U. K population.
On the other hand
, x-axis
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time of whole day.
Firstly
, in the morning a numerous
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people
were engaging with
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, the ratio of person watching television is less than the
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radio
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Secondly
at noon 20%
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people
were interested
with both
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radio
and television. In the evening, most of the
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people
were
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TV set. The ratio of
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listeners is too tiny
in comparison
of station. The last and the least, both
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and T. v are equal in percentage.
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