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The comparison of the production and the consumption of rice in x country.

The comparison of the production and the consumption of rice in x country. mbWRq
The given line graph compares the quantity of rice which were produced and consumed by x country during 1990 and expectations for 2040. Whereas. , the rendered bar graph reveals the information about ratio of rice and other food crops which ate in x country. In detailed view, according to line graph, in 1990, the production of rice accounted 25 million tones and till 2020 the quantity of rice production remained same but it is predicted that this number will increase to 75 million tonnes during 2040. However, about 30 million tonnes rice were consumed by x country in 1990 and this figure remained steady since 2020. In the future consumption of rice will be inclined to 55 million tonnes during 2040. Probing further, as per record of bar graph, the consumption of other food crops was more than rice that was 50 percent during 1990 but in the next year the consumption of rice increased to 75 percent and othe food crops fell down to 25 percent whereas, in the next two years this ratio remained almost same as compared to past years but it is expected that the consumption of rice and other food crops will remain constant about 50 percent. Overall, it is quite apparent that, maximum production of rice was done by x country and plethora of people ate rice.
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, in 1990, the production of
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accounted 25
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