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Table shows data about 3 different types of restaurants.

Table shows data about 3 different types of restaurants. xD2WN
The given table depicts the cost and time spent for lunch and dinner in three various categories of restaurants. Overall, it can be noticed that Sit-Down restaurant is most expensive compared to cafeteria and fast food. . moreover people also spend their more time in Sit-Down Restaurant. To begin with, Average cost of lunch is highest in sit-down restaurant with $10 which is $3 more than cafeteria. However, fast food hotel has cheapest lunch. secondly, people spend 45 minute for eating lunch in sit down restaurant whereas they stayed only 30 minute and 20 minute in cafeteria and fast food subsequently. On the other hand, median cost of dinner is higher than lunch in sit down restaurant which is $17. Price of dinner in cafeteria and fast food hotel are $9. 50 and $5 respectively which is also more than cost of lunch. Furthermore, during the time of dinner they spend 1 hour in sit down restaurant which is almost thrice of fast food restaurant and in the cafeteria people spend 45 minute for dinner.
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given
table depicts the
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cost
and time spent for lunch and
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dinner
in three various categories of restaurants.

Overall
, it can
be noticed
that Sit-Down
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restaurant
is most expensive compared to
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cafeteria
and
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fast
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food
.
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moreover
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people
also
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spend
their more time in Sit-Down Restaurant.

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begin
with, Average
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cost
of lunch is highest in sit-down
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restaurant
with $10 which is $3 more than
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cafeteria
.
However
,
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fast
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food
hotel has
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cheapest
lunch.
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secondly
,
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people
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spend
45
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minute
for eating lunch in sit down
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restaurant
whereas they stayed
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only
30
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minute
and 20
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minute
in
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cafeteria
and
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fast
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food
subsequently
.

On the other hand
, median
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cost
of
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dinner
is higher than lunch in sit down
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restaurant
which is $17. Price of
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dinner
in
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cafeteria
and
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fast
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food
hotel are $9. 50 and $5
respectively
which is
also
more than
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cost
of lunch.
Furthermore
, during the time of
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dinner
they
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spend
1 hour in sit down
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restaurant
which is almost thrice of
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fast
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food
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restaurant
and in the
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cafeteria
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people
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spend
45
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minute
for
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dinner
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IELTS academic Table shows data about 3 different types of restaurants.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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