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the change in car ownerships

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The line graph indicates the variation in the percentage of households that owned no car, one car and two or more cars in Great Britain during a 40-year period from 1961 to 2001. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the car was a much less popular household item in the 1960s than it is today. Approximately 65% of British families did not have their own car, about 34% had only one car and no family owned two or more cars in 1961. In 1981, there was a significant rise in the percentage of families with one car, reaching the peak of 50%, whereas the proportion of households with no cả markedly dropped to 35%. During the same period, there was 15% families that owned two or more cars. From 1981 to 2001, families with no car were still the majority, but their percentage went down slightly to 43% by 2001. However, the figure for families owned no car saw a drop to less than 30%, while an increasing number of families purchased an additional car pushing the proportion of households with two or more cars to a record high of 29% at the end of the 40-year period.
The line graph indicates the variation in the percentage of
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in Great Britain during a 40-year period from 1961 to 2001.
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household
item in the 1960s than it is
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today
. Approximately 65% of British
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families
did not have their
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car
, about 34% had
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only
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and no
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two or more
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in 1961. In 1981, there was a significant rise in the percentage of
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families
with one
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car
, reaching the peak of 50%, whereas the proportion of
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with no
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cả
markedly
dropped to 35%. During the same period, there was 15%
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owned
two or more
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cars
. From 1981 to 2001,
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with no
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were
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saw
a drop to less than 30%, while an increasing number of
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purchased
an additional
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pushing the proportion of
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201 words
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