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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of cars sold by manufacturers in various areas between 2006 and 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of cars sold by manufacturers in various areas between 2006 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of total car sales was higher in Asia and Europe than in the other regions. While there was a downward trend for North America over the period. As shown in the bar chart, in 2006, the highest proportion of total car sales by manufacturers was recorded in Asia, accounting for 35 percent, and this percentage remained steady the following year. However, apart from a brief rise from 35 to 38 percent in 2008, this figure dramatically decreased in 2010, with 30 percent. In Europe, the percentage of total car sales double over the period from 25 percent in 2006 to 50 percent in 2010. In sharp contrast to this, there was a significant decline in the proportion of car sales in North America, measuring at 29 percent in 2006. However, this figure decreased continuously to finish at just 9 percent in 2010. In terms of total car sales in South America, this percentage fluctuated when the figure then decreased from 11 percent in 2006 to 5 percent in 2007, there was a had upward trend in 2008 witnessed 6 percent. Especially, in 2010, total car sales then recovered 11 percent to the same percentage of 2006 accordingly.
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was higher in Asia and Europe than in the other regions. While there was a downward trend for North America over the period.

As shown in the bar chart, in 2006, the highest proportion of
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car
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by manufacturers
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in Asia, accounting for 35
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, and this
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remained steady the following year.
However
, apart from a brief rise from 35 to 38
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in 2008, this figure
dramatically
decreased in 2010, with 30
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. In Europe, the
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double over the period from 25
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in 2006 to 50
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in 2010.

In sharp contrast to this, there was a significant decline in the proportion of
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in North America, measuring at 29
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in 2006.
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9
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in 2010. In terms of
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in South America, this
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fluctuated when the figure then decreased from 11
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in 2006 to 5
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in 2007, there was a had upward trend in 2008 witnessed 6
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then recovered 11
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of cars sold by manufacturers in various areas between 2006 and 2010.

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